Judicialis: Chapter Eighteen (Final)DAWN OF THE SUMMER’S DAY came hot, without a breath of wind or the usual morning chill. The sun seemed to come up faster than usual. It rose swiftly and flashed like a torch with dazzling rays.The dew on the lawns near the Capitol and bushes was drawn up in an instant. The earth was perfectly dry so that the clods crumbled. The courthouse had been still from an early hour. Only a Justice walked down the hall every now and then.Anna was standing in the main hall.She had taken her father's place, just like her mother had said long ago when she was young. Her father had died from old age peacefully in his sleep at his home.A couple of Justices and guards hummed as they walked through the building.Anna walked away and decided to go deeper into the building.A delicate frightened call came to her ears.She listened and went closer, perfectly softly, keeping among the shadows, and moving noiselessly as she had long known how to do.The call came again, more urgent, more plaintivel
Judicialis: Chapter SeventeenTHE COLD BROKE, AND THERE WAS a warm spell in the middle of the winter. The earth drank great drafts of the melting snows so that wide stretches of soil were everywhere visible across the street.One such morning Anna was roaming around as usual. In the grey dawn she came to the edge of the courthouse. On the farther side where she had stayed before something was stirring. Anna stayed hidden in the shadows of the pillars and peered across. A person was wandering slowly to and fro, looking at the area where the snow had melted.Anna wanted to turn at once and go away, for she recognised Damon. Her first impulse was to run forward and yell for him. But she stood as though rooted to the spot. She had not seen Damon for a long time. Her heart began to beat faster. Damon moved slowly as though he were tired and sad. He resembled his brother now, but he was more taller and muscular.Damon turned his head and gazed across as though he felt her presence. Again Anna started forward, but she sto
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I think this character has a very interesting design! The dark eyeshadow makes her eyes pop really nicely (I also love those eye colors!), and I love the poofy, wild hair as well.